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My breathing,
Got harder,
On your neck.

My hands,
Ran down,
Your body.

I moved closer to you,
Because I could feel the passion,
Burning inbetween us.

I lifted my head.

"I love you,
And I've been waiting.
So show me now,
That it's been worth it.
Show me you didn't lie,
Show me I didn't waste my time,"

I turned.
My breath was on his lips.
He leaned up,
And I stopped him.
I looked him in the eyes.

"I've been waiting,
These days, I have counted.
And I mean it, I love you,
So show me you do too,"

That time, I pressed my lips softly against his.

I closed my eyes,
He tilted his head,
Then our love became real.
More real than love itself.
Because, this wasn't love from one another.
This was love. One love.
Our love.
Our love...
©2005-2009 ~skaterfreak11114
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Author's Comments

This is the last part. I didn't really like it, because it's not my style...and...I'd really like anyone who reads this to be true about what they think about it. If you don't like it, say so, please.

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:iconfallensnowstears:
nice! I like the first two a bit more..but maybe its just b.c those were sweet...this one is excellent..lolz..(=^_^)
*banana pocky!!!!*
0_0 if you were Pocky, what flavor would you be>?

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"The hidden world is a dream, like the truth of a night's memory"
~Clamp
:floating::snowflake::heart::snowflake::floating:
:iconskaterfreak11114:
Yeah...Pt. 1 and 2 are so much better. But...I don't even know what Pocky is.

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I've changed my mind so much, I can't even trust it....
My mind's changed me so much, I can't even trust myself.

[link] -- Most amazing poem ever. Read it.
:iconfallensnowstears:
lolz.really?!?!
0_0 poor you..you've been neglected of one of the most awesome japanese sweets ever invented..hmm..put in "japanese pocky" on search engines or something..you might get a pic of it..

~but basically its just a stick of wafted cracker, covered in a flavored coating of something..like, there are chocolate(some with peanuts too! yum!) and strawberry, and banana..I think even lime or something like that..
but yeah..its really popular in Japan..(I took japanese in college for a yr, and I love that culture..hint: my anime and manga spazzing..) lolz..

but yeah..:hug: its oki..not many people know aboot it.. but if you go to a suncoast or something, they are likely to have it..and it is SO worth buying!!! its oishi desu! (delicious!)
(=^_^)

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"The hidden world is a dream, like the truth of a night's memory"
~Clamp
:floating::snowflake::heart::snowflake::floating:
:iconfindinglight21:
hey nice work just wondering... are you gay or what???

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captain scarlet feavor
:iconskaterfreak11114:
Pfft, duh. Yeah, I am. Thanks for commenting.

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I've changed my mind so much, I can't even trust it....
My mind's changed me so much, I can't even trust myself.

[link] -- Most amazing poem ever. Read it.

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